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 We have made a debate whether we should have breakfast outside. Some think it is  very good.

 

    We have made a debate whether we should have breakfast outside. Some think it is  very good. Above all,

it saves time. As the saying goes, "Time is money." Anothet reason for it is that not eating at home will make

it unecessary to get up so early. What`s more, they think they can get more delicious if they eat outside.

    However, others have diffrent opinions. The most important point is that the food outside is bad for one`s health.

In addition it will cost much money which is a waste.

    In my opinion, eating at home is better for us. After all, the food cook at home is sofer than that outside, isn`t it?

 

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       We have made a debate whether we should have breakfast outside. Some think it is  very good. Above all,it saves time. As the saying goes, "Time is money." Another reason for it is that not eating at home will make it unnecessary to get up so early. What`s more, they think they can choose more kinds of delicious food if they eat outside.

    However, Many others have different opinions. The most important point is that the food outside may be bad for one`s health. In addition Food bought outside will cost much more money which is a waste.

    In my opinion, eating at home is better for us. After all, the food cooked at home is more healthy than that bought outside, isn`t it?                              (124字)

 

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